<div dir="ltr">I would have to agree. The writing here is targeting an audience that is probably already in agreement with the author. If the intention is to bring new information to those who don't have it, I'd suggest providing more background on the information provided in the article. But that's possibly what you meant by "suitably edited". <br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Mon, Jul 20, 2015 at 1:09 PM, Karen Aram via Peace-discuss <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:peace-discuss@lists.chambana.net" target="_blank">peace-discuss@lists.chambana.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
<div><div dir="ltr">This is good for the politically aware, but for novices, which is often those to whom we are distributing they might not get it. <br> <br><div><hr>Date: Mon, 20 Jul 2015 09:30:44 -0500<br>To: <a href="mailto:peace-discuss@anti-war.net" target="_blank">peace-discuss@anti-war.net</a><br>Subject: [Peace-discuss] Proposed flyer for AWARE demo Sat. 1 Aug.<br>From: <a href="mailto:peace-discuss@lists.chambana.net" target="_blank">peace-discuss@lists.chambana.net</a><span class=""><br><br>How about a suitably edited version of the following as the verso, the recto being our usual general description of AWARE’s purpose?<div><br></div><div><a href="http://davidswanson.org/node/4836" target="_blank">http://davidswanson.org/node/4836</a></div><div><br></div><br></span>_______________________________________________
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