[Newspoetry] 50 word poem
emerick at chorus.net
emerick at chorus.net
Wed Jul 21 13:39:38 CDT 2004
I enjoyed the thoughts of your poem -- it was pleasing to see Santa, Uncle Sam, and Sam (the O-ring Mascot) captured, at last. They have been at large too long. They have terrorized too many -- bugging them to find out who's been naughty and nice, keeping lists of enemies and friends of their administration, permitting no appeals against their clemency and self-pardon.
But, why fifty words, when 500 hundred hats, slowly morphing into the most beautiful of ultimate crowns, once bedecked the pate of Bartholemew Cubbins (aka Bart Simpson)? A word -- like a hat -- covers and hides the head that holds it. Conceptually, it's all conceptual. The experience of a storm is never so real as its memory, if you survive it, with a memory in.tact and in.formed -- like a certain news station's vain promise of news.
Give me NewsPoetry, or give me a d'earth of news!
(Ooops, there's no opposition in that synonymy!)
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