[Peace-discuss] Mort's flyer

[C. G. Estabrook]

The flyer will be distributed at the regular monthly demonstration on 
Saturday 4 August (Main & Neil, Champaign, 2-4pm).  It will be available 
at the AWARE tables at the Farmers' Market, Sweetcorn Festival, etc.; 
and on the AWARE website.

The intended audience is the modern equivalent of the audience for the 
debates Lincoln held in public squares with Douglas.  Would their 
vocabulary now be too erudite and their grammatical constructions too 
difficult to follow? --CGE


John W. wrote:
> 
> Who is the intended audience?  And how soon are you intending to 
> distribute these flyers?
> 
> If I were to suggest that the text is way too long and too dense for the 
> average reader (I'll refrain from saying "Joe Six Pack"), with a 
> vocabulary that is far too erudite and grammatical constructions that 
> are difficult to follow, would I be hated?  Would I be expected to 
> rewrite the flyer?
> 
> John Wason
>