[Makerspace-keymembers] Payment FAQ

[Gergana Slavova]

Ah, English, my old friend ...

Jeff, up to you.  I would generally stick with same spelling (whichever you
choose) throughout the article.

~Gergana

On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 1:08 PM, Emily Knox <emilyknox at gmail.com> wrote:

> Both of the cancelled are correct.  It's completely annoying.
>
> http://grammarist.com/spelling/cancel/
>
> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 1:06 PM, Gergana Slavova <
> gergana.s.slavova at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Such a great idea!
>>
>> - For the 2nd question "How to cancel", I would split where it says
>> "Note: ..." into a separate paragraph.
>> - Be consistent when you conjugate "cancel" - sometimes you say
>> "canceled" (with one 'l') and something it's "cancelling" (with two "l"s).
>> I don't know if one over the other is correct but pick one.
>>
>> - I would also add the following sentence to the top-level paragraph, new
>> line after "Please click on one of the donate buttons below to support us
>> today."
>> "Scroll to the bottom of the page for a list of frequently asked
>> questions on payments and cancellations."
>>
>> Thanks, Jeff!  Looks really great.
>>
>> ~Gergana
>>
>> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 12:46 PM, Emily Knox <emilyknox at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> I would change this from "next" to "then":
>>> First follow the instructions above for cancelling your subscription.
>>> Then simply sign up again with your new card information.
>>>
>>> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 12:44 PM, Jeffrey Putney <quaker at gmail.com>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hey Everyone,
>>>>
>>>> As we've had a few inquiries about updating payment methods and things,
>>>> I added a little FAQ section to the donate page:
>>>> https://makerspaceurbana.org/donate/ If you could check that it is
>>>> clear and makes sense that would be great!
>>>>
>>>> Thanks!
>>>>   Jeff
>>>>
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