[Makerspace-keymembers] Payment FAQ

[Nadia Karlinsky]

Run-on alert :) "Note: You will not get a confirmation email, the website
will simply tell you if your subscription was successfully canceled."

Maybe an emdash instead of the comma: "Please note that you will not get a
confirmation email -- the website will tell you if your subscription was
successfully canceled."


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Nadia

On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 1:11 PM, Gergana Slavova <gergana.s.slavova at gmail.com
> wrote:

> Ah, English, my old friend ...
>
> Jeff, up to you.  I would generally stick with same spelling (whichever
> you choose) throughout the article.
>
> ~Gergana
>
> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 1:08 PM, Emily Knox <emilyknox at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> Both of the cancelled are correct.  It's completely annoying.
>>
>> http://grammarist.com/spelling/cancel/
>>
>> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 1:06 PM, Gergana Slavova <
>> gergana.s.slavova at gmail.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Such a great idea!
>>>
>>> - For the 2nd question "How to cancel", I would split where it says
>>> "Note: ..." into a separate paragraph.
>>> - Be consistent when you conjugate "cancel" - sometimes you say
>>> "canceled" (with one 'l') and something it's "cancelling" (with two "l"s).
>>> I don't know if one over the other is correct but pick one.
>>>
>>> - I would also add the following sentence to the top-level paragraph,
>>> new line after "Please click on one of the donate buttons below to support
>>> us today."
>>> "Scroll to the bottom of the page for a list of frequently asked
>>> questions on payments and cancellations."
>>>
>>> Thanks, Jeff!  Looks really great.
>>>
>>> ~Gergana
>>>
>>> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 12:46 PM, Emily Knox <emilyknox at gmail.com> wrote:
>>>
>>>> I would change this from "next" to "then":
>>>> First follow the instructions above for cancelling your subscription.
>>>> Then simply sign up again with your new card information.
>>>>
>>>> On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 12:44 PM, Jeffrey Putney <quaker at gmail.com>
>>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> Hey Everyone,
>>>>>
>>>>> As we've had a few inquiries about updating payment methods and
>>>>> things, I added a little FAQ section to the donate page:
>>>>> https://makerspaceurbana.org/donate/ If you could check that it is
>>>>> clear and makes sense that would be great!
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks!
>>>>>   Jeff
>>>>>
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