[Peace-discuss] Lehrer brochure

Bob Illyes illyes at uiuc.edu
Fri Sep 16 15:21:36 CDT 2005


Carl, Mort et al.

Consider leaving out the 8/16/01 paragraph. There's no
obvious connection with the war-related stuff, and I think
this is a case where less would be more in terms of impact.

Also, consider putting a couple of things in bold, particularly
"Until April 4, 2004 Muqtada Sadr had urged his followers to
protest peacefully against American occupation".

Bob



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