[Newspoetry] anybody want to revise this?

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Mike Lehman wrote:
> 
> William,
> I like the concept, but have a hard time believing that the Tribune would
> ever actually advocate democracy (even to the Gazette.)  Maybe you need to
> pump a little more irony into it at that point.
> 
> I'm not quite sure about the ending either.  Maybe it needs some sort of
> clarification or elaboration.

I get the part about the Tribune, of course my parents still get the
damn
thing back home.

I thought the ending was funny, even though I didn't quite understand
it.
Forgive me, but who is Ms. Chinigo?

glenn


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